Score: 7

"Had its' potential"

submission: Jesus & Hitler Comedy Hr.

date: December 18, 2009

I always liked these styles of flashes because they are well animated, not too complex, and you can get a good laugh or two out of them. Although I liked this, it could use some improvements.

The art was very well detailed and friendly, the kind you want in a comedy like this.
But the animation wasn't that well, by that I mean the movement seemed frame-by-frame because you can tell that the background is moving slowly and that it is only 5-7 pictures played back of the rest of the movie.
The lip syncing was a bit off and didn't match the words that well.
Also, the exertions of the characters stays the same nearly all of the movie.

The voices were done bad in a very good way. Making Hitler sound like a guy with a bad French accent made it seem silly in a good-comedic way. I also like how the voice acting was clear and didn't have that annoying ring in the background. But the voice acting was mostly monotone which made it seem a bit less entertaining, I'd also like to hear some background noises, without them, it will seem that it's lacking something.

All in all, this was a decent flash, but what really got me is that this was your first flash, and if you ask me, this is a hell of a flash. Just add some background noises, and sync both the animation and the sound.

Score: 0

"Sorry man"

submission: Frivolous Sonic Spoofs 1

date: November 30, 2009

I don't find this creative nor amusing, and once again, you ripped off another flash form a series that has been dead for about 6 years, and now featuring Shawnick da haghawg? Aw mah ficking Gawd!

The animation was lazy, it contained very little detail and only had sticks with their arms stretched horizontally with their bodies just moving left to right. Nothing good there.

As their voices, well, they were done by speakonia, which was recorded bad, and their lips didn't sync well, in fact, they didn't have lips which meant it was hard to understand who was talking.

Your humor was just bad, it wasn't funny and it was unoriginal, like when sonic robbed the jewelery store, that was something new, but it was not creative nor original.

This was bad, you ripped off another series, the animation was lazy, the audio was recorded bad and because of that, the story was hard to understand, and lastly, this had unoriginality written all over its humor.

Score: 5

"Not sure if I liked it"

submission: Sonic - BotR DEMO

date: November 27, 2009

Since this is a demo, I won't bash it as much as I'd normally do to a game like this.

I wouldn't call this an RPG since it all is clicking an arrow to get to the next dialog changing a persons' emotion not really doing anything, plus selecting an action doesn't effect the story, and if it does, it isn't that dramatic, either way it leads to the same place of the story. This also lacks sounds, music and movements in attacks, at the very least some power-ups.

What I liked about this game is that you did not add any recolors or unofficial characters (excluding that green dog? :P) and putting real characters unlike sonic current games. But what I really like about this, is that you drew your own art instead of being lazy and using sprites and pulling drawings off of the internet and not giving credit to the author let alone asking permission. Also, this game isn't a waste to the people who play it (maybe), you added unlockables, a gallery and a fighting scene, which made this demo seem somewhat enjoyable.

I do ask to change some bugs though, sometimes when you click on continue, it takes you to the middle of the game and has your party full with names as unidentified, also, after you save, the game freezes in a black screen. Sorta like your first one, eh? ^-^

This was enjoyable for a demo, lacks some things here and there, has its ups and downs, I hope you can improve by the next one and fix these glitches.

Score: 5

"Good idea-Poorly executed"

submission: Creation of the World

date: November 21, 2009

As I find to be somewhat creative, there are many flaws.

The narrator was speaking dull and wasn't "getting in to it", like a good one would, he was speaking in monotone, or just in one tone which made the flash seem unappealing and dull. In other words, the narration was done horribly and with no effort and lack of excitement.

Animation was done nearly as bad as the narration. It lacked detail and backgrounds. But there were times the animation was done good and put effort in to it, like the alien, it had alot of details, moved smoothly, and had some backgrounds.

Thats really what I have to say, I was very disappointed oh how this turned out, I really hope you can remake this and put life into it, instead of simple drawings and a narrator who can put excitement into this.

Score: 7

"Good enough"

submission: Miner Dash

date: November 5, 2009

Quite nice and a very addictive game as in matter of fact.

This has quite a debate though

~Positives~

-Good art, seems that it has some effort put into it

-Simple game and yet fun

-Upergrades were nice but could have improved

-Save feature

-Clear audio

-The program was nicely done

-The tutorial was clear and understandable

-Enemies were fairly done

~Negatives~

-The game gets boring after a while just getting bags and going back to the shop

-Music in the shop was uncreative, it was just effects in garageband from differant grenes looping

-The point of the game was to collect money and buy upergrades, as the money saves, the uprgrades dont, that just pisses me off a lot that makes me want to just put it down and never play it again.

-You cannot fight back at your enemies which makes it a bit hard

-Text in shop overlaps

-Too many gliches, when I get hit 3 times and the game freezes but the motions still go, but everything stays still. And sometimes I just get hit out of no where and at times the enemies did not appear at all making it very easy.

-All the differant people are the same

~Improvements~

-Add some achevments

-Unlockables that can be unlocked by not buying anything at the shop

-Make each person have their differant skills and differant status

-Add some differant modes

-Make differant backgrounds that isn't just a desert, like a mined mabe

-Also make differant tracks instead just a line going down, add some turns or some broken tracks that you need to move out of the way or jump to not get hit, things like that.

~Overview~
I hate it as much as I like it, gets really frustrating the fact that you cannot keep your uprgardes and that you basicly waste your time getting the money and buying them
I hope that you can use these suggestments in your next game if you make anotherone, please give me feedback.
Nice game overall.

Score: 0

"This was terrible"

submission: Ni99a Penguin Reloaded

date: November 2, 2009

This first part took too much advantage of black stereotypes, like killing a guy, metting someone and then doing it/her, paying hookers and having big lips.

The second part just one of those "Penguins" just holding a microphone not doing anything just standing there falling "down" on the air and jumping off a cliff.

Third part was bad too, all it was was one of those things holding a penis shaped sax and a what seems to be a violin not doing anything but standing there again!

Fourth part was the worst of them all, again, it was random music with a "penguin" dressed up as a gay guy I assume, standing like a mindless zombie, again.

Man this flash was an abomination getting worse after every skit. I am sorry but this was just horrible, and this is the way I feel about it and I am sticking with it.

Score: 0

"This is an abomination"

submission: Old Sonic parody (2007)

date: October 24, 2009

Sorry to give you this a bad review but, this flash sucks.

~Positives~

none

~Negatives~

-You ripped-off another flash thats has already been done
-The animation was terrible
-Audio and the background music was low on quality.
-There weren't much backrounds
-There was an excessive lack of details
-It was a Sonic and spongebob cross over
-Everything was out of line (Like outlines were missed or the lines stopped mind way of the figure)
-At sometimes the audio was out of place and sound effects were too loud.
-Everything was out of place when they move.

~Overview~

This was no good at all. Everything lacked improvement, the "art", the audio, the sound effects, the backgrounds, and the plot.
I also don't like the way you added Sonic and Spongebob as the characters of the this. Overrated and unoriginal.

Even though this flash is terrible as fawk, it shows how, much you have improved on animation and quality of flash making since 2007.
Your current flashes have smooth animation, clearer audio, decent plots, and backrounds.
But, in the end, I didn't like this flash. Sorry.

Score: 10

"Brilliant!"

submission: FUCK SMBZ 8

date: October 14, 2009

This flash contains more than just perpusely bad made parts. This contains of what a fan boy would have done if they would have made tribute or how a fan boy would react to a new episode of SMBZ

How I love the way you made a flash only the quilty of a fan boy flash. All four of you had great parts and "truths" of a fan boy.

Orangebeef- Although it was horrible as fuck, you did ti on perpuse of how a sonic fan boy would have made a tribute to SMBZ.

DaveB0rt- I love the way you draw, it is like Livecorpse (Rest in peace), SeanJoystick, and Zicaid combined. All in all, it was something I could get a chuckle out of.

Genderless-Hoocker- What an exellent part! It was reffering as if alvien retired, and a fan boy making a flash about him out of is excitement. Well, I laughed so hard when a guy was cumming out of joy of the new episode of SMBZ

Levon- Man your part was the most with the "Fan boy theme flash" For one, it was Mario vs Sonic in a way a fan boy would make it, very lazy, using text, not making a good fight seance, and using that 3-D color. In otherwords, it was great. Mr. Levon, keep it up!

All of your parts were great, and all of them had messages, messages to fan boys of how they act/react to SMBZ and how they would make trubutes.

All of you have outdone yourselfs. I hope to see more stuff like this in the future.

Super Job. All of you!

Score: 3

"Can't say I liked it"

submission: Mario and Sonic Bloopers

date: September 27, 2009

As how I love to see flashes with smooth spriting, I am afraid to say this is the first that I did not enjoy

To start off, the jokes (I woulden't call them jokes, they were not funny at all) were done many times, mostly just recycled from other flashes made no less than 6 years ago.

The jokes were also just plain not funny, I mean, Mario eating a mushroom and getting sick/throuhing up; now were did we see that before?
Tails getting mad as sonic for letting him die? Why I think I saw that before!
The jokes are just no funny, these have been done shitloads of times.

Although I did enjoy the intro, it was not enough to get my vote.
I am sorry but this could have been a good flash if you had another writter, I agree with you 100% about you getting nearly all the credit. As you said, he needed help form you getting ideas, and most all the ideas he came up with were not funny or were just done over and over again.
All in all, I did not enjoy this at all

I am so sorry, but I just have to give you a 3, I would have rated a 0 but since you did nearly all the work, I have to cut you some slack.
3/10
1/5

Score: 0

"Uhh ok"

submission: Sonic says "shit"

date: August 29, 2009

I could say many things but most will add up to the main reason of why I give this a low score. This isnt your work, all you did was convert the file of the episode clip.
This really contained no effort whatsoever. Besides, this was in Japanese, it doesnt mean it is what he is saying is shit.
Thats all I got to say, it doesnt count as your work and yada yada.